This is England Task

I did a task on a film poster for 'This is England' which is a film produced by Warp X, and was highly successful due to its British Subculture, and how relate-able it was for the target audience, it showed a grim side to Britain which shocked it audience, but also allowed it to show verisimilitude with the real life of the working class. I watched this film last year, and completed the task on the Poster this year, in which both have helped me to see what I will have to do with my film in order to make it real for the audience and allow my target audience to relate to it.
This is the task which I completed, along with my teachers feedback: